I love the minimalism you have in the track, these very distant vocals that came with piano sounds at the beginning had me turn up the volume a bit to tune in deeper. 🙂
The intensifying and subsiding of soundscape is also fantastically put, honestly.
When it comes to critics, I don't really think there is anything missing. Sure, it's always possible to improve it or change things, like a faded away sample of someone saying "he's bad for you!" or something similar to enhance the chorus a tad more, but other than that:
Great job. 🙂
It's one of the better tracks I have taken a listen so far!
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